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K.Lord: /* Development Log */

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Development Log

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K.Lord at 22:36, 31 May 2018

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Description

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 ==Highgarden==
-Highgarden is a small garden area situated on the top of a small island off of the north western shore of the main Fahets island.
+[[Highgarden]] is a small garden area situated on the top of a small island off of the north western shore of the main Fahets island.
 The area was discovered by Keith during a trek across the main island of Fahets. It was later developed into a rest area for members of the Third Path Council. When the council disbanded the area lay unused until Keith decided to release it to the general public. The Linking Book for Highgarden was made public on the 1st of October 2022 and can be found in [[Chiso Preniv]]<br />
 ==The Hub==

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 Highgarden is a small garden area situated on the top of a small island off of the north western shore of the main Fahets island.
-The area was discovered by Keith during a trek across the main island of Fahets. It was later developed into a rest area for members of the Third Path Council. When the council disbanded the area lay unused until Keith decided to release it to the general public. The Linking Book for Highgarden was made public on the 1st of October 2022 and can be found in [[Chiso Preniv]]
+The area was discovered by Keith during a trek across the main island of Fahets. It was later developed into a rest area for members of the Third Path Council. When the council disbanded the area lay unused until Keith decided to release it to the general public. The Linking Book for Highgarden was made public on the 1st of October 2022 and can be found in [[Chiso Preniv]]<br />
 [[Highgarden|See entry: Highgarden]]

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 The area was discovered by Keith during a trek across the main island of Fahets. It was later developed into a rest area for members of the Third Path Council. When the council disbanded the area lay unused until Keith decided to release it to the general public. The Linking Book for Highgarden was made public on the 1st of October 2022 and can be found in [[Chiso Preniv]]
+[[Highgarden|See entry: Highgarden]]
 ==The Hub==

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 ==Highgarden==
 Highgarden is a small garden area situated on the top of a small island off of the north western shore of the main Fahets island.
 ==The Hub==

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+[[File:Fahets-overview-map.jpg|200px|thumb|right|
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 ==Appearance==
-Fahets is a large island with a series of smaller islands scattered off its coast. The area of the main island varies from jungle forests and swamp land to barren rocky area. Whilst the Age is relatively large visitors only have access to the "Basin" area currently.
+Fahets is a large island with a series of smaller islands scattered off its coast. The area of the main island varies from jungle forests and swamp land to barren rocky area. Whilst the Age is relatively large visitors only have access to the "Basin" and Highgarden area currently.
 During the destabilization of the Age a large section of the Fahets island to the south collapsed into the sea creating a new island off the coast.
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 ==The Basin==
-The Basin is the name given to the initial Link in point for Fahets. It is a grassy area rich in wildlife with a small pond at one end. The area is prone to heavy rains which often caused the basin to flood. As a result a large water pump was installed to keep the water levels down.
+The Basin, also referred to as Fahets "Prime", is the name given to the initial Link in point for the Age. It is a grassy area situated within a small basin surrounded by a rocky forest. The area is rich in wildlife with numerous plants growing throughout. At the bottom of the basin is a small pond. The area was prone to heavy rains which often caused the basin to flood. As a result a large water pump was installed to keep the water levels down.
-The Basin is the name given to the initial Link in point for Fahets. It is a smallish rocky basin dotted with boulders. The area was prone to flooding from heavy rain so a water pump was installed to keep the levels down.
+During the destabilization of Fahets the land within the basin shifted resulting in the basin floor, and pond, becoming tiered. A section of the basin walls collapsed allowing easier access to the area outside of the basin. This collapse was secured and a new path built to make accessing the outer area of the basin safer.
 Populating the area are large columns of carved stone that in some areas have fused with the surrounding landmass.
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 ==The Crimson Vale==
-Originally known as The Vale, it was once a serene area with large mushrooms surrounding a lake. After the destabilization event there has been a curious change in the area. There have been changes to the plants in the area causing them to grow significantly larger than they were once capable of, furthermore red spores cover the area like snow causing the trees and other plantlife to take on a red colour. As a result the air in the area has become unsafe without the use of Maintainer suits. What has caused this change has yet to be determined but this "infection" as it has been termed is slowly expanding outwards and threatens the Basin area as well.
+Originally known as The Vale, it was once a serene area with large mushrooms surrounding a lake. After the destabilization event there has been a curious change in the area. There have been changes to the plants in the area causing them to grow significantly larger than they were once capable of, furthermore red spores cover the area like snow causing the trees and other plant life to take on a red colour. This has resulted in the air in the area has become unsafe without the use of Maintainer suits. What has caused this change has yet to be determined but this "infection" as it has been termed is slowly expanding outwards and threatens the Basin area as well.
-==Norapod Swamps==
+An air tight observation point has been constructed to keep an eye on the "Crimson Blight" and study it in the hopes it can be stopped or reversed.
-The Norapods in the swamp seem to thrive on the waters in the area allowing them to grow to vast sizes dwarfing the smaller ones found elsewhere on the Age. A wooden walkways curve between the towering fruits leading to various outcrops of rock.
+==Highgarden==
-The swamp is also home to an enclosure established by Keith containing beetles used for ink creation after he discovered the beetles react well to the Norapods fostering their growth rate and size.
+Highgarden is a small garden area situated on the top of a small island off of the north western shore of the main Fahets island.
 ==The Hub==
-Whilst not actually an area for Fahets, the hub is located in [[Cass]] and serves and a "nexus" of sorts allowing for access between the various areas of Fahets.
+Whilst not actually an area for Fahets, the hub serves and a "nexus" of sorts allowing for access between the various areas of Fahets.

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 -10-09: Some minor repairs have been made to the piping for the water pump.
-Authorized explorers “Vid” and “Paradox” stop by for a visit.
+Authorized explorers "Vid" and "Paradox" stop by for a visit.
 Age is up for review to see if it passes Phase 5 and reaches approval for public release.
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 Supply crates have been brought in to aid in the development process.
--10-09: Water has built up again due to the recent rain, Sophie’s team is looking into developing a new pumping system following some D’ni examples found in the cavern.
+-10-09: Water has built up again due to the recent rain, Sophie’s team is looking into developing a new pumping system following some D’ni examples found.
 Studies into the “Norapods” that grow within the Age have commenced.
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 -06-09: Work on the Age recommences after a long hiatus. Pumps has forgotten to be turned on during the hiatus, as a result the heavy rain fall the Age is prone to has once again flooded the area.
-As a boon however the wildlife has flourished from all the rain. The Roseleaf tree was not so lucky.
+-08-08: Plans for development have been given a complete overhaul. Water levels have lowered significantly.
 -08-08: Descriptive Book rediscovered after being missing for about 2 years. Age has been badly flooded due to the heavy rainfall over the years. Nexus Book has been damaged to the point where it is unsafe to use, the Book has been removed. Assessment of the water revealed that it has become stagnant, pumps have been brought in to remove the water. Plans drawn up for Age development.

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 After initial visits were made to the Age, the [[Linking Book]] was misplaced in [[The Third Path|The Third Path’s]] archives and remained missing for a couple of years before being discovered again. In that time the Age had flooded badly from rain and the water needed to be pumped out before work could progress on developing the Age for public release.
-The Age went through a period of destabilization due to minor flaws within the [[Kormahn]]. As a result the landscape was effected causing rifts in the floor and rock face. The Age was later stabilized due to Garohevtee provided by [[Lore]]
+The Age went through a period of destabilization due to minor flaws within the [[Kormahn]]. As a result the landscape was effected causing rifts in the floor and rock face. The Age was later stabilized and has remained stable since.
 ==Appearance==
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 The Basin is the name given to the initial Link in point for Fahets. It is a grassy area rich in wildlife with a small pond at one end. The area is prone to heavy rains which often caused the basin to flood. As a result a large water pump was installed to keep the water levels down.
-During the destabilization of Fahets a section of the basin walls collapsed allowing access to the area outside of the basin. This collapse was secured and a new path built to make accessing the outer area of the basin safer.
+During the destabilization of Fahets the land within the basin shifted breaking the pond into 2 sections on different levels. A section of the basin walls collapsed allowing easier access to the area outside of the basin. This collapse was secured and a new path built to make accessing the outer area of the basin safer.
 The Basin is the name given to the initial Link in point for Fahets. It is a smallish rocky basin dotted with boulders. The area was prone to flooding from heavy rain so a water pump was installed to keep the levels down.
-The outer area of the basin is a rocky landscape with large trees and a myriad of flora and fauna. Evidence of the destabilization can be seen with large fissures in the ground opening up to lava below. A pathway once lead to the vale but this has been closed off since the Age was in upheaval due to the nature of the changes in the vale.
+The outer area of the basin is a rocky landscape with large trees and a myriad of flora and fauna.
 ==The Crimson Vale==
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 Originally known as The Vale, it was once a serene area with large mushrooms surrounding a lake. After the destabilization event there has been a curious change in the area. There have been changes to the plants in the area causing them to grow significantly larger than they were once capable of, furthermore red spores cover the area like snow causing the trees and other plantlife to take on a red colour. As a result the air in the area has become unsafe without the use of Maintainer suits. What has caused this change has yet to be determined but this "infection" as it has been termed is slowly expanding outwards and threatens the Basin area as well.
-As a result Keith has constructed an air tight observation pod to keep an eye on the issue and study it in the hopes it can be stopped or reversed.
+As a result an air tight observation point has been constructed to keep an eye on the issue and study it in the hopes it can be stopped or reversed.
 ==Norapod Swamps==
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 -08-08: Descriptive Book rediscovered after being missing for about 2 years. Age has been badly flooded due to the heavy rainfall over the years. Nexus Book has been damaged to the point where it is unsafe to use, the Book has been removed. Assessment of the water revealed that it has become stagnant, pumps have been brought in to remove the water. Plans drawn up for Age development.
--03-07: Copying the Age text from the practice book to the Korteenea has been completed. Initial visit to the Age has taken place and samples taken to assess for safety. Results returned as clear, exploration and mapping commencing.
+-02-07: Copying the Age text from the practice book to the Korteenea has been completed. Initial visit to the Age has taken place and samples taken to assess for safety. Results returned as clear, exploration and mapping commencing.
 [[category:Human Ages]][[category:Ages]]

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 Fahets was the first successful Age that was Written by [[Keith Lord]].
-After initial visits were made to the Age, the Linking Book was misplaced in The Third Path’s archives and remained missing for a couple of years before being discovered again. In that time the Age had flooded badly from rain and the water needed to be pumped out before work could progress on developing the Age for public release.
+After initial visits were made to the Age, the [[Linking Book]] was misplaced in [[The Third Path|The Third Path’s]] archives and remained missing for a couple of years before being discovered again. In that time the Age had flooded badly from rain and the water needed to be pumped out before work could progress on developing the Age for public release.
-The Age went through a period of destabilization due to minor flaws within the Kormahn. As a result the landscape was effected causing rifts in the floor and rock face. The Age was later stabilized due to Garohertee provided by [[Lore]]
+The Age went through a period of destabilization due to minor flaws within the [[Kormahn]]. As a result the landscape was effected causing rifts in the floor and rock face. The Age was later stabilized due to Garohevtee provided by [[Lore]]
 ==Appearance==
-Fahets is a large swamp environment that is littered with vast stone columns. The Age is comprised of several areas although vistors only have access to the one area (The Basin) at this time.
+Fahets is a large island with a series of smaller islands scattered off its coast. The area of the main island varies from jungle forests and swamp land to barren rocky area. Whilst the Age is relatively large visitors only have access to the "Basin" area currently.
 ==The Basin==
 The Basin is the name given to the initial Link in point for Fahets. It is a smallish rocky basin dotted with boulders. The area was prone to flooding from heavy rain so a water pump was installed to keep the levels down.
-During the destabilization of Fahets the basin walls shattered and collapsed, allowing access to the area outside of the basin.
+The outer area of the basin is a rocky landscape with large trees and a myriad of flora and fauna. Evidence of the destabilization can be seen with large fissures in the ground opening up to lava below. A pathway once lead to the vale but this has been closed off since the Age was in upheaval due to the nature of the changes in the vale.
-==The Lake==
+==The Crimson Vale==
-Heading out past the basin walls a path curves down into a large cavern. This area is known as The Lake and is home to a myriad of wildlife such Norapods, Chaaus, Chrooms, Grapines and Vikah mushrooms. Wooden walkways curve their way around large stalactites handing from the cavern roof and granting access to the Sun Room.
+Originally known as The Vale, it was once a serene area with large mushrooms surrounding a lake. After the destabilization event there has been a curious change in the area. There have been changes to the plants in the area causing them to grow significantly larger than they were once capable of, furthermore red spores cover the area like snow causing the trees and other plantlife to take on a red colour. As a result the air in the area has become unsafe without the use of Maintainer suits. What has caused this change has yet to be determined but this "infection" as it has been termed is slowly expanding outwards and threatens the Basin area as well.
-On the opposite side of the lake there is the Book room which allows for access to the Cove and to the Vale which are other areas of Fahets.
+As a result Keith has constructed an air tight observation pod to keep an eye on the issue and study it in the hopes it can be stopped or reversed.
-==The Cove==
+==Norapod Swamps==
-The Cove, also known as crescent rock is a rocky outcrop that bares a crescent shape from which it draws its name. The location is the nesting ground for the Grapine and as such is a rather dangerous place to visit. The Grapine use the muddy shores of the cove to lay their eggs and is where most of them seem to congregate.
+The Norapods in the swamp seem to thrive on the waters in the area allowing them to grow to vast sizes dwarfing the smaller ones found elsewhere on the Age. A wooden walkways curve between the towering fruits leading to various outcrops of rock.
-==The Vale==
+The swamp is also home to an enclosure established by Keith containing beetles used for ink creation after he discovered the beetles react well to the Norapods fostering their growth rate and size.
-Known as the Crimson Vale it is home to a place called Tre'Merktee or Place of Poisoned Waters (named after the D'ni location of the same name). Tre'Merktee is heavily populated by fungi of various species, some of which tower above the location like skyscrapers. Spore dust coats the area giving it its crimson colour. Vents below the water caused by the destabilization brings up sulfur making the water dangerous but feeding the various fungi in their vast growth.
+==The Hub==
-==The Hub==
+Whilst not actually an area for Fahets, the hub is located in [[Cass]] and serves and a "nexus" of sorts allowing for access between the various areas of Fahets.
 ==Wildlife==
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 Glowcap - Mushrooms with bioluminescent caps.
-Grapine - Aquatic lizard like creature. Has long spines on back that looks like blades of grass. The spines extrude a paralytic which they use to paralyze animals and eat them when they fall into the water. Paralytic is capable of subduing humans.
+Mangark (Grass Shark) - Aquatic lizard like creature. Has long spines on back that looks like blades of grass. The spines extrude a paralytic which they use to paralyze animals and eat them when they fall into the water. Paralytic is capable of subduing humans.
 Chaaus - Weird pod things that collect underneath trees and rocks. Give off a blue light. May be egg sacks for the Croombs.
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 Mangrove Trees -
-Sunion - Onion shaped bulb plant that is connected to floating fungi like pads. The pads expand when sunlight hits them.
 Vikah Mushrooms -